Copy for Paragraph Analysis 2

Copy for Paragraph Analysis 2

In this blog post, I am going to analyze my paragraphs in my Rhetorical Analysis. The Copy for Paragraph Analysis 2 can be accessed here. I analyze utilizing the following bullet points:

• focuses on a main point (RfW 4a)
• develops the main point (RfW 4b)
• organizes itself internally (RfW 4c)
• links ideas coherently (RfW 4d)
• provides smooth transitions (RfW 4d)

Later on, I discuss my strengths and weaknesses of my paragraphs.

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Strengths and Weaknesses

As a strength, I provide many transitions and make my ideas flow smoothly into each other. I accomplish this through the use of transition words. However, I seem to have many more weaknesses than strengths. During peer review, I noticed that it was common for people to note the bias. I think the bias that I wrote about took away from the main idea and development because I did not adequately describe the controversy. I ended up saying how the author was bias. Whereas, I wanted to bring the point across that he touches upon both sides of the argument. By failing to do this, my analysis lacked proper meaning. When I go back to edit this, I will consider to rephrase and recreate the purpose of the text.