Saturday, September 19, 2015

Copy for Paragraph Analysis

Copy for Paragraph Analysis

Silsor. "Pilcrow.svg." 1/30/06 via Wikipedia. Public Domain License.

In this post, I am going to be commented on each paragraph of my QRG. Each paragraph will be analyzed on the following: focuses on a main point, develops the main point, organizes itself internally, links ideas coherently, and provides smooth transitions. After looking back at my copy of my QRG, the same errors have occurred. Therefore, I am glad that I went back to adjust them.

I noticed that my paper fits everything. I just need to work on my conclusion and add a little more development about the boy against the healthy school lunch plan.

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